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英语长诗:命运之人(写给已死的爱情) 中文翻译见2楼 [复制链接]

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这是我这辈子写的第一首英语诗,顶一下啦。 全文押韵,请慢慢读吧,语句不会太难的。 全文有6个part,最后一个part应该是最精彩的吧,希望我的经历能够作为前车之鉴吧。 如果语法有不妥之处请多多赐教,就这样啦,写给已死的爱。

A PERSON IN MY FATE(命运之人)

PART 1

Who are you? You are a person in my fate.

Numb and confusion was filled in my heart.

You attract me a lot,

But why you leave me at a crazy rate?

I know the giant difficult was in my front.

But I have to follow your footprint.

Because I love you, my sweetheart!

PART 2

Recalling the happy days we had,

You were my former desk mate.

I still remember the moment,

Just at the earthquake night,

You firmly held my hand.

A warm stream flowed into my blood.

That moment I’ll never forget.

It’s the prettiest memory I’ve ever had.

I don’t know what the true love is like.

But I’m sure you are my lifelong secret.

PART 3

However, that all became past tense.

You and I eventually went on our separate ways.

Although I’ve tried my best to find reasons.

The god just fooled me with his mysterious tricks.

I got your no answers.

I got your no response.

That you never want to give a glimpse of me become miserable facts.

I told myself it is me that is false.

Maybe you never loved me once!

Maybe you never loved me once!

I said to myself sometimes.

My heart is painful, my heart is getting wounds.

Where are the wounds from , who knows?

Whether you could understand my mood ,who knows?

That you are my everything everthing ,who knows?

My heart is falling down from the space.

You are my only fuel that I could use.

To some guys,

My puppy love sounds ridiculous.

Because they could never realize,

Why I’m willing to jump into the trap love sets.

This is called ‘courages’.

This is called ‘beliefs’.

This is called ‘I love you, yes!’

PART 4

I could never bear these days.

These days I miss you hopeless.

How hopeless it is

is one thing you could never realize.

I’ve lost my way in the class.

I’ve lost my aim in the subjects.

I have a sleepless at some nights.

But you will appear in my dream at other nights.

Anyway, I miss you 24-hour days.

You are my air that I could breath.

After long-time considerations,

I decide to give us a choice.

Whether you refuse or unanimous,

This will be an escape from my pains.

PART 5

Today, in the corridor,

I told you all the things.

We both bowed our heads,

Communicating in no voice.

Finally I told you the three words

Finally you refused me with smiles.

But I’ll still wait you,

Until my life ends.

It’s the time we leave this sad place.

Maybe it will be a chance

That we start our new lives.

PART 6

Walking in the avenues,

Covered with raindrops,

I see the flowers falling down from old trees,

Fading their brilliant colors.

The cool wind still blows.

Leaves quickly gather and cover the flowers.

I pick them up to my hands,

Thinking love is just like this.

No matter how pure it was.

No matter how pretty it was.

Puppy loves are doomed to become tragedies.

As if the flower has its days.

Talking about past is meaningless.

Just let it be.

Let it be a part of our fates.

June 29th 2009

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    最后编辑sailor071414 最后编辑于 2010-05-23 16:29:08
    本主题由 超级版主 37°2 于 8/13/2009 7:32:52 PM 执行 设置高亮 操作
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    命运之人中文翻译

    先看看原文再看翻译吧,原文是精华。

    A PERSON IN MY FATE (命运之人)

    PART 1

    你是谁?你是我的命运之人。

    我的心中充满了困惑与不安。

    你深深地将我吸引,

    然而你为什么又要这么快的离开我?

    我知道巨大的困难已经横在了我的面前,

    但我却必须追随你的脚印。

    只是因为我爱你。

    PART 2

    回想起我们度过的快乐时光,

    那时候我们还是同桌。

    我依然记得那个时刻,

    就在那个地震的夜晚,

    你紧紧地抓住了我的手。

    一阵暖流顿时涌入了我的血液中。

    我将永远不会忘记那一天,

    因为那是我这一生中最美丽的回忆。

    我不知道什么叫做真正的爱,

    我只知道你将是我终身守护的秘密。

    PART 3

    遗憾的是,那些都已经成了过去时。

    我和你最终分道扬镳。

    尽管我尽最大的努力寻找原因,

    但老天只是给我开了一个又一个可悲的玩笑。

    我没有得到你的答复。

    我没有得到你的回应。

    你再也不愿再看我一眼,

    这已经成了悲惨的事实,

    我一次又一次告诉自己这是我的错。

    可能你根本就没有爱过我!

    可能你根本就没有爱过我!

    我常常这样对自己说。

    我的心碎了,我的心受伤了。

    这些伤口从何而来,谁又知道呢?

    你究竟能否理解我的心情,谁又知道呢?

    你是我一切的一切,谁又知道呢?

    我的心正从宇宙深处坠向大地,

    而你是我唯一可用的燃料,助我再度升空。

    对于其他人来说,

    我的初恋是那么的荒谬可笑。

    但他们永远无法知道,

    为什么我心甘情愿地跳进爱情设下的圈套。

    这叫做“勇气”;

    这叫做“信念”;

    这叫做“是的,我爱你”。

    PART 4

    我已经无法忍受这些日日夜夜,

    这些我绝望地爱着你的日日夜夜。

    到底有多么绝望呢?

    这可能是你无法想象的。

    我失去了我的方向。

    我失去了我的目标。

    在漆黑的夜晚我经常失眠,

    即使我睡着了你也会出现在我的梦中。

    总而言之,

    我对你的爱可能是24小时不间断的吧。

    如果说足球是我的兴奋剂,

    那么你就是我的氧气。

    经过一番艰难的考虑,

    我决定给我们两人一次选择。

    无论你拒绝也好、同意也好,

    这对于我来说都是解脱。

    PART 5

    今天,在这个熟悉的走廊里,

    我对你澄清了一切。

    我们都羞涩地低下了头,

    倾听着对方的诉说。

    最终,我对你说出了“那三个字”

    最终,你微笑地拒绝了我。

    但我还会等你,

    直到高考结束。

    或许是时候离开这个伤心之地了,

    也许这也是一个机会,

    让我们重新来过。

    PART 6

    走在荫蔽的小道上,

    沉醉在淅沥的雨丝里,

    我看到老树上的叶子纷纷扬扬地飘落下来,

    叶子早已褪去了他翠绿的颜色。

    北风依然吹个不停。

    落叶渐渐掩盖了散落在路旁的花瓣。

    我将落叶和花瓣捧在手心,

    想想爱情又何尝不是这样!

    无论它曾经多么纯洁,

    无论它曾经多么美丽,

    我的初恋注定将会成为一个悲剧,

    就像落叶一样,命中注定,无法抗拒。

    往事已经无法改变,

    就顺其自然吧,

    让这份爱成为我们命运中的一部分吧。

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    最后编辑sailor071414 最后编辑于 2009-08-12 18:29:44
    One team ,one life

    Being one gunner for one day ,to be one gunner forever
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    翻译组,干活!
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    好诗
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    我的真实经历。。。
    One team ,one life

    Being one gunner for one day ,to be one gunner forever
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    回复 3# Pryce 的帖子

    www.google.com 好湿!
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    明天出中文翻译
    One team ,one life

    Being one gunner for one day ,to be one gunner forever
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    为你弹奏肖邦的夜曲 纪念我死去的爱情 想起来我几年前写给元帅大人的文...
    最后编辑Zlatan 最后编辑于 2009-08-12 00:55:49
    君生我未生,我生君已老。我离君天涯,君隔我海角。

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    最近被激发了
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    等到这篇帖子 我眼泪都下来了 一周了 等得我花儿都要谢了 好歹有位仁雄救命 我感觉重获新生了 原创咖啡厅的光荣岁月回归了 最后一段很顺口 合辙押韵 至于翻译还是让楼主自个来吧



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